- make each footstep quieter
- ensure that each footstep is in sync with when she steps
- make doors opening and slamming more noticeable
- make the rustling in the matchbox louder
- make the girls laughter fade out
- sounds such as the chair and the heartbeat get louder but sounds such as the string and jewellery box get quieter
- place more obvious wind at the beginning
- add a soundtrack on the book
From looking closely at each section of our opening sequence it is easier to pin point exact changes that need to me made, this has been useful for us as instead of constantly watching it and changing aspects, we know exactly how to finalise our piece.